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Write On

by , Friday September 8, 2017
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 Write On

 

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  • AonRao

    mumbled "Update"

    1 years agoReply
    It's been a while since I've been on and I feel like I've missed out on so much!

    Just a quick update on my life, in case anyone is interested. I'm in my junior year of college and school work is kicking my butt. I had a stats midterm last week--and I kid you not--I stared at the first question for at least five minutes, so I ended up just skipping the first page and doing as much as I could before I went back to it. Then when I finally finished, I triple checked my work and found a mistake each time. I've never been so stressed during a test! I hope we get our exams back soon, but knowing the prof, it might not be until next week.

    Now this week I have a chemistry midterm on thermodynamics and quantum mechanics. I'm not ready at all so I've been frying my brain with studying and frying my brain even more by reading and writing for fun. But at least I'm coping in a healthy way.

    Anyway, I hope the rest of you aren't going through a stressful week and if you are, it's okay because in a few days it'll be the weekend and then we can cry, sleep, and repeat. Lol :) But seriously, I hope you are all doing well!

    Best,
    AonRao
  • AonRao
    2 years agoReply
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    I felt a chill run up my spine. This hits way too close to home. Thank you for writing this piece.

    "I weep for the sorrow/ That is the pool of/ Blood upon the white linen..." This is my favorite line. It's packed with such power and emotion. I can feel the anguish radiating off your words.

    I also really like the change in the font size at the very end. It's almost like a whisper or maybe an afterthought or realization. This poem was very well thought out. Thank you for sharing your words.
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  • AonRao
    2 years agoReply
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    I absolutely love your work in this piece. The words seem to flow so effortlessly. I love the pacing and the rhythm, especially in "Click Click." I also appreciate your use of the word "ephemeral." (It's one of my favorite words.) Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your words.
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    The first attempt at proper poetry and the next and the next. "Not a tea stain, but a rain stain," "Does my heart tangle like headphones in a pocket?" "...mascara tears registers exhilaration under...
    Katie Pharoah
    2 years ago
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    Thank you so much, I'm glad you like them :)
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