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Planning for Nanowrimo 2018

by , Tuesday October 9, 2018
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Planning for Nanowrimo 2018

October means Prep Month for Nanowrimo participators this year and I've sworn to be a Planner.


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  • Katie Pharoah
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    Ooh the ending of the second chapter, gave me chills a little :)
    Tension
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    Tension is a story in two parts about a young barista, who discovers that she has super powers, and a chipped friendship. Meanwhile, a criminal empire rises, and the barista is faced with a choice. Is...
  • Katie Pharoah
    This is a great premise, can't wait until I can read more
    Dirt-Man (A Tribute to Stan Lee)
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    (This is a Tribute to Stan Lee.) Dirt-Man believed that his Grandfather, Sandman, was very evil, what with Spiderman and Thor and every single amazing hero said that it depended on how you looked at it....
  • Katie Pharoah

    mumbled "New Story "

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    This one is about superheroes and is for the Stan Lee competition. Feedback is always welcome. Excelsior :)
    Origin StoriesThe only advice a superhero can give someone is that powers are overrated. I know that sounds stupid, especially coming from someone who has powers himself...
  • Katie Pharoah

    mumbled "Draft 2 Completion "

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    After nearly three weeks of intensive drafting, Day 723 has finally been rewritten and checked for plot holes and flaws. It's not perfect, nothing ever is in my book. But it's done. I'll be republishing the chapters until the novel is fully published over the next couple of weeks. For now, the first 8 redrafted chapters are there for your viewing pleasure.
    Feedback is always welcome.
    Day 723There are two Possibilities. One; humans have given up after a nuclear war killed half the planet, in return, those without money either succumb to the...
    Shaun JH Nightshade
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    Well done. Look forward to reading it :)
  • Katie Pharoah
    Looking good so far, your historical fiction always impresses me. Some CC; take care a little with punctuation, there are a few cases with !... where one or the other is necessary, also the first chapter repeats twice. Easy fixes though, looking forward to more :)
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    "If you scorn me first, sir, you can bet on your life that I'll scorn you second and the final word of our petty little argument will be mine to keep." Talented, rich and playful, Rebecca Crox swears...
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