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Hello, and welcome! This is my old account, where I used to publish various stories and fanfictions when I was younger. I've decided to leave them here for you to enjoy, but if you would like to read something fresh, check out my new account, Raven Aiken.

  • CursedByLove
    Hmmmm, I'm going to be perfectly honest with you here, I don't like it. This would perhaps work if the original HP series didn't exist, but because it does, you are basically denying anything JK has ever written about Harry. You have described him completely differently, so the story lines just clash too much. Also, you might want to work on longer chapters and instead of telling the reader everything about your main character in the first sentence, just let things be revealed as chapters go on. So that it seems less like she's aware that a story is being written about her, and more mysterious.
    The One He Left Behind
    The One He Left...
    We all know the story of Harry Potter, the-boy-who-lived. But what if there's a story of the-girl-who-lived...a story Harry has been trying to find.
  • CursedByLove
    Was this inspired by 'The Lottery'?
    My Child
    My Child
    I am 23 years old, and I am one of the youngest people on Earth because women stopped being able to conceive years ago. Hello! My name is Lynette Olsen, and I am pregnant. --Entry for the Science Fiction...
    Lavern L.C.
    4 years ago
    No it was not. I have, however, read The Lottery (if you are referring to the short story)
    4 years ago
    Oh, I'm sorry, I meant the t.v series. :) It is also about how woman can no longer have children, except that it is shown from a doctor's point of view. (She manages to somehow recreate children again and the government decides to let people enter a lottery, the winners receiving one of the 100 children existing, hence "The Lottery")
    Lavern L.C.
    4 years ago
    That's sounds a really awesome show! :-)
  • CursedByLove
    I've just read this, and I really like it! It's a very interesting movella, but maybe you could keep to one tense? For example, instead of: "I'm going to go to the beach. Then I went to the beach" you could say: "I was planning to go to the beach. Then I went to the beach" :) I'm not trying to be picky, I just thought I'd help you improve and I can't wait for another chapter!
    Our Love?
    Our Love?
    This is a story about Samantha Parker. She isn't your perfect teenager. She isn't the prettiest in school,she doesn't have perfect hair,or a flat stomach. But that doesn't matter to Issac Jackson.
  • CursedByLove
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    Hey! So I've changed the plot to Braided (yet again, I feel so bad for you! I mean, I'd make the cover myself, but I'm terrible, and you're amazing!) and I feel like I need a new cover :) I really am sorry, this is I think the third time you would be doing it again for me! I'll send you a picture I like and explain what I'd like done differently below! Thank you for being so patient with all my requests! :*
    Title: Braided
    Author: CursedByLove
    Blurb: "Rapunzel. So that is the name that once belonged to the troubled being that is me? The name that once lead me to greatness, but kept me locked up in a twisted tower for exactly sixteen years? Can any of it be true? Are fairytales a reality?" Emily was found unconscious in a forest near England on the first morning of Spring, 2013, with no idea who she was or where she came from. The only memory she possessed was an old photograph of a little girl up in a tower, staring at the stars. She was left to deal with her problems and fight in the name of good, but with a terrible price. One that could not be easily paid. It was either that, or let everything and nothing to be destroyed, letting evil win.
    Mood/Genre: Dark, adventure, fantasy, fairytale, mystery
    People I want on: (I'll send you a picture down below)
    Quote: When Fairytales become Reality
    Deadline: Any time! :)
    Also, could the cover maybe have something forest related? And slightly scarier, fancy fonts, making the title really stand out? Thank you!

    I understand that your cover store is closed at the moment, but I might not have time to post this later on, so I'm just going to do it now. Please ignore this message until your store is open for business again :D
    Covers and Critiques »Closed Momentarily«
    Covers and Critiqu...
    The new store for covers, banners, and critiques (reviews) Request in the comments below! Forms in the chapter; examples have their own second chapter :)
  • CursedByLove
    Will you update soon? Please, I love it so much, and I really can't wait for more! I am dying to find out what happens to Snow next!
    The Other Side of the Story
    The Other Side of...
    The normal high school student, Raven, needs to analyse the famous fairy tale of Snow White. Thinking this as easy, she soon uncovers the truth about the perfect Snow White, and realizes it is much deeper,...
    Bells Hunter
    5 years ago
    Thank you! i am currently working on re-writing the whole thing (especially the beginning) like by adding details and such, but yes! thanks so much<3
    5 years ago
    That's great! :D
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