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A friendly person with a strong interest in writing!

  • JammyBandStudios
    I have a genuine request here. Please add more colour! At the moment, most of the page is white and boring. This website and the community is fun, light hearted and joyful, and the colour scheme should reflect that. So please add more colour!
  • JammyBandStudios
    Yay I finally read it! It's really cool!
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    It all began when they left. when they died. The worst day of my life. Charlotte (Charlie) McLaylei is in huge trouble - when her parents died the killer left her alive but know he wants her dead only...
    Molly Bennett
    5 years ago
    yay! Thank you and you are the first reader to post a comment! hooray! what do you think - critiquely?
    JammyBandStudios
    5 years ago
    I love the idea of the story as a whole. However, there are many grammatical and spelling errors that sometimes make it difficult to read. Despite this there are some amazing parts like the paragraph starting "at the end of the way I throw open the double doors..." towards the end of chapter 3 which are brilliant. Perhaps one day (if you want to) you could go through and correct any grammatical errors? Its not a huge problem, but would makes the story even more enjoyable! Awesome! :D
    Molly Bennett
    5 years ago
    Amazing thank you so much I will go through soon sorry
  • JammyBandStudios
    You are not a writer? You believe you are pretending to be a writer? I can tell you that everyone is a writer - they just may have not unleashed their full potential. Its not all about writing skill. It's about your imagination, ideas, how well you believe in it etc. And I can also tell you that you DO have the ideas and writing skill. You are AMAZING but you just don't realize it yet. Perhaps you didnt choose the right genre or storyline; but you, without a doubt, ARE a writer. Everyone is a writer. You are one of them, and you are a darn good one too.
    Give it a break. Take a few weeks off writing. Relax. But come back with new ideas and aspirations. Come back with buckets of enthusiasm! Have a positive attitude and start writing. If the idea is right, the pen won't stop. If you have found the right story, you may find yourself engrossing in what will happen to your characters. "How will I right the next part?" "What happens next?".
    Just take a break and come back later. You ARE a writer. No one can tell you otherwise - not even yourself. You have the potential so just come back with a positive attitude and have fun!
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    Life is anything but ordinary for 16 year old Elle. Her mom died when she was 6 and her dad ran away with her math teacher. Everything seems to be going okay. Until she meets three boys.. Tucker, Holden,...
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    Please marry me. That is honestly the nicest thing anyone has EVER said to me.
    JammyBandStudios
    5 years ago
    <3
  • JammyBandStudios
    Wow! The update is fantastic! I'm not gonna be like 'UPDATE PLZ NOW' because I know that is kinda annoying, but I will say that you should definitely continue this story next time you have a few minutes spare. I love it very much and can't wait to see how the story evolves! :D xx
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    The familiar jingle of a bell as the bright pink sweet shop door is opened sends shivers down your spine. You never wanted to come back here. Neither did you expect to. You should be dead.
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