FemaleUnited StatesMember since 19 Nov 13Age 21Last online 4 years ago

A little about me :)
I am from Texas, but live in Enlgand.
I have traveled all over Europe.
Writing is my passion, it's what makes me feel at peace when I need it most.
Some of my favorite authors include JRR Tolkein, Rick Riordan, Stephanie Meyer, Christopher Paolini, Andrea Cremer, and James Patterson.
I am absolutely obsessed with the Hobbit and How to Train Your Dragon series and love the game Skyrim, so basically i love anything to with fantasy. :)
Any and all constructive criticism is welcome, if you think there is something missing or wrong, please let me know :)
P.S Celtic music is amazing, go check it out.
I am also on Wattpad as JEliseWilliams :)

  • JEliseWilliams

    mumbled "Writers Block"

    I am in need of some serious inspiration right now. I realize I haven't written anything in a few weeks, I know how I want everything to go, but I just don't have the urge to do so. I'm listening to the music that usually gets me going, but nothing. Any help?
    4 years ago
    read Eragon
  • JEliseWilliams
    1 Like
    WOW! You are so detailed I feel like I'm right in the book, you're really 'painting the picture'. Keep up the great work!!!
    Rogues and Renegades
    Rogues and Renegad...
    The non-competition version (because the non-competition world has no damn WORD LIMITS). So, i'll post the rest of the story here. if I win anything (highly doubting that, btw) i'll transfer the chapters...
    Midnight Rogue
    5 years ago
    Thank you very much! Glad you're enjoying the story ;P
  • JEliseWilliams
    I love the plot of this story, i love mermaids which also brings up the point that i so see some similarities with the TV show H20 ( the cave, being three girls, and the scene where they walk up to the sea), did you also watch it?? I do not see that as being a problem unless you would like to professionally publish it, in which you could be fined for plagiarism, but don't take that the wrong way i love this story. I love that you are really detailed with you setting, it really brings the picture to life, i can really see how Indiana is as a person. Also, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors in chapter four and to make the story a bit longer you could elaborate the plot some, like when her friends were telling their own story or by adding some more dialogue between the characters. But altogether a very good story, keep up the good work and update soon :)
    | Mermaid |
    | Mermaid |
    When Indiana almost drowns something unexpected happens-she turns into a mermaid. Every time she touches water she evolves into a mermaid. How will she keep her secret?
    5 years ago
    H2O is amazing isn't it!! and you did real well with the addition, i think it adds more to their character. Also, i would like to know what you think of my mermaid story, Siren Song, if you wouldn't mind checking it out even though it's only one chapter. :)
  • JEliseWilliams
    I absolutely love fear, child sight and moonlight, amazing!! I also love that you use different rhyme schemes and not just the popular ABAB, keep up the good work ;)
    poetry lives.
    poetry lives.
    This is a book full of . Poems I have written! I hope you like it! Enjoy! :3
    5 years ago
    Thank you, that is very sweet. I just don't think that the ABAB is really good. It has been overused for years. I try to make up my own rhyme schemes.
    5 years ago
    definitely, your poems are also easy to interpret the meanings, especially for someone like me who only knows the construction of a poem. I can never figure out what Frost or any of the older writers are trying to say, lol.
    5 years ago
    ha! my sister would disagree with mine being easy to understand, at least, but thanks.
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